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Tuesday, December 11, 2012

Hesitiation

Based on Alfred Stevens’ Hesitation (Madame Morteaux).   

Just outside the pinewood door, she hesitated, her most recent needlework in hand. She had modeled it after a painting her betrothed had bought home from his last voyage to China, imbuing the piece with porcelain, fans, and women dressed in patterned robes with long, wide sleeves. It weighed heavily on her fingertips, pressing against her leg through the fabric of her gown. Was it ready? Would her mother approve? She tucked her knocking hand to her chest and closed her eyes as she listened to the ladies within the sitting room. At her throat, the blue ribbon itched.
As she glanced back at the circular thread cabinet, the glimmering sapphire on her finger caught her eye. Images of her betrothed’s delight flashed through her mind: the afternoon sunshine washing the green walls and family portraits of the sewing room. The way all of the furniture gleamed with the new wood polish her father had used that morning. The way her betrothed’s face split with a grin as she showcased the almost-finished product. She sighed and straightened he hair. If it was good enough for her husband-to-be, it would have to be good enough for her mother.
She rapped confidently on the door before letting herself in. 

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